Arien Elensar

02:00 am: Poetry

I'm the lai, with no sort Of grave, solemn thought, And I Will never be caught By miseries sought, Nor sigh; Where battles are fought Or arguments brought, I fly. What Poetry Form Are You?

(post what you guys get please)

When I took this quiz like a month ago I got a Sonnet, or was it a Terza Rima?…well, anyways, so I wrote some poetry for school stuff



The first is a Terza Rima sonnet for AP English; it was inspired by Sailor Neptune’s attack Deep Submerge. I know the rhyming is a bit off, I’m really not good with rhyming, if I do rhyme, it’s usually by accident.

DEEP SEA
Crashing waves of emerald, I am the sea.
Hidden depths the eye does not perceive
Even the burning flame dare not challenge me

Here were the kin of Amphitrite conceived
Their home is this Neptunian abyss
Where treasure troves lay hidden if you’ll believe

These memories of ages long dismissed
My mournful cries are now but all submerged
Echoed by violin, when string and bow kiss

Though through myth and lore I may have endured
The unfaltering hands of merciless time
Have left my soul weathered since I emerged

Never again shall this expanse ever gleam
As it once did of enchanting depths unseen


The second was for Music Appreciation, we had to write something in ten minutes and it had to be about love with at least one rhyme; so obviously it turned out to be a piece of crap.

(UNTITLED)
Long ago, our worlds collided
And now our fates decided
Are one and the same
You and I are more then lovers

I share your moods
And know your dreams
For I too reflect that very light
You and I are more than lovers

If death bring down its mighty glaive
And you leave the circles of this world
You will still continue to be
One and the same
You and I are more then lovers


Btw, Sailor Neptune’s Deep Submerge attack from the Japanese version: